Nowdays, technological developments have fostered communication between individuals as well as group of individuals. Communication is preferred by people using technologies like video calling instead of meeting. A plethora number of people in a populace are communicating socially or professionally using computers. This has merits as well as demerits. In the upcoming paragraph I will elaborate both of them.
Embarking upon, one of the major benefit of liaising via internet is that persons sitting far away in distant countries can interact with each other. Usually there are situations in a business when two individuals have to interact with each other and they are residing in countries which are located very far from each other and if they choose to interact face to face a lot of time will be wasted. For instance, a firm which is located in USA what to be in touch to a company in India and if they choose conventional meeting method their most important resource i.e. time will be wasted. In addition to this, liaising via web also increases profits of the firm as the money which is required to travel to another country is reduced by the use of internet as it is cheap.
On the other hand, one of the major drawback of communicating by the use of technology is the lack of emotions. In modern world people who choose to liaise by using internet do not understand the feelings of the other person to which he is communicating. As a consequence of this people are becoming practical in their life and do not understand the emotions of other.
To conclude, technology is helping firms by saving their both time and money thereby increasing their profits. The major disadvantage of interacting by using internet is the lack of emotion.
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- For centuries, important parts of education have remained such as reading, writing and maths. With the advent of computers, some people think that computer skill be made as a fourth skill to be added to the list. To what extent do you agree? 56
- Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes Do you agree or disagree 81
- Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from Prison What do you think are the causes of this What possible solutions can you suggest 78
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90540540541 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95923576842 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5720476155 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252418790838 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886772852833 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769189656112 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150396659191 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616100601955 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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