More and more business as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally of socially rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.
Due to advancement in technology, most of the people use the number of communication methods instead of direct face to face contact. However, there are many pros and cons behind using technology for communication which we will discuss in this essay.
Looking at the positive side, discussion with any person in just fraction of second becomes reality because of technology as compared to previous traditional methods of writing letters or meeting directly to the person. In other words, we can communicate with many people at the same time and any location of the world through various methods such as video conference, emails, phone calls and so on. Ultimately, any message can be instantly transferred to its destination and also can get feedback on an immediate basis which resulted in the boom in the business across the globe.
On the other hand, people are facing certain problems owing to the use of technology in data sharing in organizations. For example, significant data can easily be transferred by someone to other professionals for a bribe which may destroy the future of the existing company. Moreover, even if someone mistakenly uses the wrong email address, then their important message can be in other's hand and he may be in the dilemma. On top of that, hackers may steal the crucial information any company, which is being communicated by someone for their business purpose, can be a serious threat to that company.
In conclusion, though there are many drawbacks of utilizing technology for communication its advantages can not be overlooked and communication can be made secure as well as effective for the growth of companies of the entire world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11636363636 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91520720668 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.569136269 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.7 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.2 7.06120827912 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235439977419 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10170877729 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554808803773 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158999564558 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639898386987 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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