More and more children are performing their talents on reality shows. Some people welcome this as a way to nurture young talents; others are worried that rising to fame at such an early age may disrupt children's personal development
It is an indisputable fact that these days, there are more and more participation of young children on TV shows. They play such a vital role in view rates or number of followers of those shows. In fact, there are also some programs that are merely created for children's education or entertainment in order to show off their talents to everyone. However, some presume this do wonders for children in developing their potentials whereas others reckon this may break off their own growths. To my perspective, standing the chances of appearing on these shows clearly has scores of benefits for children that cannot be denied for some reasons
To begin with, taking part in reality shows genuinely helps children boost their confidence and eloquence immeasurably.
They need to be on the ball in order to make the shows more intriguing and captivated. It is their responses to the quizzes or challenges or questions that make them build self-esteem and self-control. There is no apprehension since there are always adults acting as host or guests longing to guide them properly. Furthermore, they are likely to figure out their own inscrutable potentials when they have a chance to discover themselves and their capabilities. Hence, it is substantially a golden opportunity for children to participate
Moreover, children are bound to learn how to response properly to other people. No matter when they make a mistake, there will be adults who can give them advice and fix them on a silver platter. Besides, this could be a favorable environment for children to make friends to one another and work together if needed. This will help them grow faster as they not only can meet a number of people but also get helps and love from them. Undoubtedly, it will positively impact on them.
To sum up, taking all the mentioned ideas into account, I believe that with proper guidance and support from parents or adults, children are literally at an advantage of joining in those shows. This will ultimately contribute to their life's memories as well as their personality development.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02023121387 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80522113126 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578034682081 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7604669009 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5625 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260255678473 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818262483927 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722789303066 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136740917202 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07988730067 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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