Nowadays an increasing number of people have spent a great number of time far away from families and friends.This essay will examine the reasons and the possible various influences on families and community.
It is undenable fact that a job has have a essantial meaning to every adult as everyone strive to ensure a good well-beig of their families, relatives . So compared to the past, nowadays people devote a lot of time to a job, not spending enough time to their families due to their heavy workload, which have come with globalisation. In addition, it is more companies have become international , resulting in an increase in the demands for requests of attending other countries. Hence numerous people should travel in other countries to deliver their outcome to the jobs, having the time out of their families. For instance, employees of companies such as Amozon, Facebook must visit various countries to meet thier cliens, to discuss some propositions at the internatianal conference, to implement some ideas contributing development of bussiness, to facilitate a partnership, to extend their business in other areas that keep them away from famalies, friends.
The lack of time with families affects the individuals and the families due to devoting support system, they are separated from loved members who bring them some pleasure moments. Due to this point, repercussion reverberates in health of the individuals, countless of them have emotional stress, diseases such as a mental diseases, a blood pressure, a cancer and moreover, efficiency, workability, productivity slow down. For example, the persons who are studying abroad have the parents which be worried about their children's eating habits, their professional level of education, sickness, as a results, this parents will get a illness caused by too much worrying.
In conclusion, a majority of people are forced to be away from their close persons due to the conditions of the modern world. However, the consequences of this fact lead to a detrimental effects which are not positive for society and families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2921686747 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97301168027 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584337349398 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3884138054 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.727272727 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1818181818 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294994665086 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103048133029 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697895950397 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159937856084 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492835516501 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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