More and more people are busy with work and do not have enough time to spend with their families and friends. Why does this happen? What are the effects on family and society as a whole?
It is true that there are an increasing number of people who are occupied with working and cannot spend their time on taking care of their families and friends. This phenomenon could be explained by several reasons and brings itself many impacts on both family and society, which will be discussed in this essay.
There are a large number of factors making a great contribution to this tendency. First and foremost, the living standard of people all around the world has significantly changed and improved so that people might no longer take into account some basic needs such as food, accommodation, transportation and entertainment. Therefore, humans now opt for much higher demand in their life, including self-actualization and the recognition from the others. This is the reason why more and more people choose to work harder to have more achievements, getting higher positions in their workplaces, or becoming a specialist in their working fields. Another important factor should be considered is that the today job market has been much more competitive which gives the fact that we are living in a globally-integrated era, and humans have to spend most their time on fulfilling their job requirements as well as securing their careers.
From some reasons outlined above, this phenomenon might have some detrimental impacts on family and society as a whole. Firstly, people probably lack of time spent on their children’s upbringing that makes them always have insufficient amount of time to give their children supervision and instructions in many fields such as education, social problems and future orientations. Thus, much more children and teenagers fall victim to crimes or social evils, and gradually have bad academic performances in the schools. In some cases, when people are workaholics, they can suffer from several serious mental problems, including stress, depression and even committing suicide. This will make a burden on healthcare services and some social organizations. Additionally, due to an ever-greater demand from work, some people are inclined to spend most of their time on working and be unconcerned with their families, especially their spouse, which has a greatly negative effect on their matrimonial lives and makes a huge contribution to the increase in the divorce rate. Last but not least, if people far more concern about their work and ignore most their friends, they might lose a significant number of close-knit friends, not getting along with their colleagues, and having troubles with many social relationships.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that more and more people today spend most their time on working, earning their living and getting promotions, which can result in many drawbacks to both family and society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2341.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 440.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32045454545 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96354486055 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 706.5 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6407499646 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.066666667 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394235737765 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132951478725 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100047518209 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260428455923 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330188831836 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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