Nowadays, people intend to use their own car to get where they need to go instead of other ways of transport. however, it causes so many problems that we suggest some solutions to decreas these effects of problems.
Using too much of own cars increase air pollution. As the cars produce exhaust fumes and carbon monoxide by burning fossil fuels. So it is obvious when the number of private cars is rising, the amount of toxic gases that pose a threat to air pollution is also increasing. In addition, by insisting to use our own cars we deteriorate traffic congestion. it means, if everyone brought him a car to roads, the traffic would be heavier. For instance, In my home town, people intend to use their cars on Friday, and traffic on Friday is so perceptible in comparison with other weekdays.
By the deep analysis of these problems, there are sensible solutions. Taking a taxi could be a good way to reduce air pollution since a number of people use one car instead of many cars the vast of exhaust fumes will decline significantly. Moreover, people could go on foot for small distances and there is no need for using any vehicles. for example, I live nearby my workplace so I walk to my workplace every morning and it is free and enjoyable without any harm to the air.
In conclusion, there are consequences for using own cars and better to use them in important manners, and also we could use alternative ways for routine transportation that are more environmentally friendly.
- The line charts show the amount of beer sold to pubs and supermarkets over six years where a bar graph displays the amount of pubs closed over the same period Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relev 67
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- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 92
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- In the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passangers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
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Suggestion: It
...cars we deteriorate traffic congestion. it means, if everyone brought him a car to...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...here is no need for using any vehicles. for example, I live nearby my workplace so ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70114942529 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74103590707 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55938697318 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1936605035 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3846153846 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206901874943 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750908350108 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460139737867 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136011181721 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540080469448 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.