The technological revolution has changed every sphere of our life by comparing the previous era. This revolution has modified our life pattern it is not only true for us but also for every animal, whereas, we have to face some new health-related issues which can not be cured by new pathological medicines. Therefore, some believe that we have to go back to the ancient health care system. I completely disagree with the latter statement.
It can not be denied by anyone, that our neoteric lifestyle is responsible for many fatal diseases like diabetics, cancers, and so on. Some of these can be made well or some of is not possible, while those can be controlled by sophisticated treatment. For example, diabetes is one of the most affected diseases in the world which has no medic in the past, even it is accountable for many deaths. But now by taking newly invented medicine, and by maintaining some health rules, and diet we can control it along with we can lead a healthy life.
Moreover, another severe disease is Alzheimer's, because of that, people have to suffer memory and behavior-related problems, while there is no solution to this disease, and traditional medicine can not cure this. Nowadays this illness can be detected through a machine, and proper medication can control its intensity. In addition, now we can know its different stages, thereafter doctors can take care of their patients.
In conclusion, in recent times due to the different lifestyles, we have to face different health problems and modern medicine work very well in most cases. To sum up, all the points above, we can say that at present we have no alternative way without the modern health care system.
- The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001 78
- The average prices per kilometre of clothing imported into the European Union from six different countries in 1993 and 2003 are shown in the bar chart below 74
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
... well or some of is not possible, while those can be controlled by sophisticated treatmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in most cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91637630662 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82070759931 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.568675815 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.538461538 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151985489001 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556765855578 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375691129766 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933961010989 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146920214331 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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