More and more people are using internet nowadays for their personal things such as shopping, paying bill.does advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Nowadays the number of people are increasing the internet using day by day. There are many effects and drawbacks when this is carefully studied.
On the one hand,there are many drawbacks of using the internet like a if we shopping at home so we have hassle free and lots of save the time and the pay of online bills so we don't need to wait in queue and in that time you can do something else that cannot be use internet. In Googlepay and PayTM are available to reward system so, we benefit from paying money from any of these and get discounted. However, anything we can take from our own wider choices and the broad options of any product so it is a main benefit for people.
On the other hand, in spite of the negative effects using the internet has important benefits for some personal things. Whenever, many people fraud of in online shopping such as, more changes with orders by products and cheat of people because the adult are not aware with technology many problems of paying bills for online such as server errors and problems can also becaused by a weak internet in many places and the internet enables people to access all products such as clothes, electronics items and going to banks or payments. There are not able to check the products and be carefully use the online shopping, paying bill and so on.
Overall, although there are many advantages and disadvantages when this issue that the more important to notice advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...s is carefully studied. On the one hand,there are many drawbacks of using the interne...
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Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ny drawbacks of using the internet like a if we shopping at home so we have hassl...
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Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun save seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of saves'.
Suggestion: lots of saves
...ping at home so we have hassle free and lots of save the time and the pay of online bills so...
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Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... time and the pay of online bills so we dont need to wait in queue and in that time ...
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Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h orders by products and cheat of people because the adult are not aware with tec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62256809339 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39139169903 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548638132296 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.209436701 49.4020404114 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296959899167 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108473571372 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715241608951 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165226496351 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071509398854 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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