One of the truths of modern life is urbanization. Due to industrialized cities have more job opportunities, people are immigrating to these cities at an enormous rate. Although, some people might be successful in finding a good job, but, they are facing big cities with great problems., for example, traffic jam and air pollution are two biggest concerns of super cities. I would discuss these problems and the ways that we could tackle with them in this essay.
To begin with, there are several reasons why lots of people immigrate to urban districts and the most important one is finding a better job with better salary to make a high quality life. While, population is increased, the city infrastructures have been remained undeveloped because, the rate of population growth is overtaking than cities expansion. For example, the number of cars exceeds the capacity of the rods. In other words, more cars on the streets equal more pollution ,and more traffic jam that each of which causes other concerns consequently.
In the case of pollution, the main problem of over population Because of the danger of this trend, there are various measures need to be taken to cope with this problem. First of all, public transportation might be the solution. I believe government should persuade people to use city train, bus, and metro more, and more. In addition, they have to put pressure on manufacturers, and industries to move out of towns. Furthermore, government should thrive rural industries such as handicrafts and agriculture.
In conclusion, therefore, the large number of cars in the cities has many impacts that people and government should cooperate together to prevent from its negative effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
...cars on the streets equal more pollution ,and more traffic jam that each of which ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r to prevent from its negative effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14695340502 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86393161397 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605734767025 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.158272084 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.571428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305476629809 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873247835337 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633560679125 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173347949342 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528339288393 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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