more and more people think that there is no need for printed newspapers. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that in an ever-changing world of technology, printed paper newspapers seem to be less useful compared to electronic sources of information. However, while many people argue that such traditional sources of news can definitely be replaced by online news, I believe that printed newspapers still play a certain role in life.
On the one hand, the advantages of electronic news coverage cannot be denied. Firstly, Internet, TV or radio allow people to expose to the various forms of information which are not only free but also up to the minute and always keep track with the latest news events. Actually, just by clicking a button, news from the whole world will show to the audiences, from stale news to the most breaking news. Secondly, the upsurge of technology creates gates to information sources in interesting ways. Online news is often demonstrated with images or even lived-video which positively impress viewers. Many readers, for example, without reading between the lines, can still understand the carried stories just by looking at the attached pictures.
On the other hand, there are several reasons that printed newspapers deserve to be maintained. One thing is that printed news still places as a primary source of entertainments to a certain group of audience. The elderly in particular, who enjoy reading newspapers for daily routine as an indispensable habit or people in rural area, who have no chance to access to the latest technology and newspaper is the only means that help them to keep up with the world. The other thing is that while it is necessary for wireless/Wi-Fi connection or a heavy laptop to carry on to reach online information, newspapers are convenient to pick up and put down, to carry and read at any free time.
In conclusion, although huge benefits that electronic news brings to our life, printed news are still important and should not be eliminated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04731861199 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82004812666 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561514195584 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0528210048 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6153846154 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0697911915034 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0259628987205 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0204960085234 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0461902027057 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217941120696 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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