More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes car and other items Why is it Do you think it is a positive or negative development

Recently, there is a tendency that many people want to own products such as clothes, cars and other items from famous brands. From my viewpoint, this is obviously an optimistic development for both economy and customers.

There are some main reasons for this actual state. First of all, the buyers now all become more intelligent and care more about the quality of merchandises they want to possess. According to this, brands which are famous and produce high-quality goods definitely meet the demand of shoppers and get illustrious. In additon, a huge part of consumers have desire to show their wealthy and evidently that the well-known brands will satisfy their illusory glory. The final explaination must be that these celebrated labels organize effective advertising campaign, which make purchasers believe that they need to own the products from these labels.

In possitive aspects, this tendency influence helpfully to the economic. To go into particulars, purchase and sale process stimulate consumption and let the cash flow go continuously and smoothly. In the others hand, this situation leads to reduce in manufacturing various kinds of imitations and the intellectual property is preserved as a result.

In my oppinion, many constructive alteration happens when more and more people choose to own goods from well-known labels and these changes are all possitive development to our society.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, well, such as, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42727272727 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89428048125 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0501751423 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.545454545 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188031757833 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602514852731 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713778515603 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112129300598 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594970014298 0.056905535591 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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