more and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, there is a contentious issue regarding whether studying abroad becomes the popular choice for students to study at colleges and universities. in my opinion, the merits outweigh the drawback.
there are many benefits to move to foreign countries to study higher education. first overseas students are likely to be self-made and independent. they do all the work by themselves like cooking, cleaning or take care of themselves. secondly, changing their environmental science, the students may get a chance to find employment after their study complete. And the wage which pay for them is probable higher than native countries. not only in foreign countries but also in their countries, when they back to home, they may have good opportunities to find a well-paid job too. finally students can improve their knowledge with excellent eduction system. moreover, they will live and work with other students of various nationalities. therefore overseas young people are open to different cultures, customs and traditional.
however, there are potential drawbacks to students changing their premises to foreign countries. the main issue is that overseas students can fall homesick and miss their families. this problem can have a negative effect on their study.another issue is that language barrier can make it difficult too. and it isn't easy to acclimatize with the new environment. finding accommodation and paying bill are another problems. they can be hard to earn this money or it will be difficult for parents to finance this.
in conclusion, the merits to students studying abroad at higher education seem to outweigh the drawbacks as it can benefit the students themselves. however, overseas young people may face challenges not to miss their families , acclimatizing the new condition and responding the finance. giving this situation, it seem that students should be stronger and more independent and make sure the finance of families. although some of them might have difficulties with the fees, but many international scholarship are offered these days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43034055728 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92607568508 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557275541796 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1042428441 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5238095238 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.380952381 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159267201131 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460723872013 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514633264487 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112206937348 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517533721626 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.