More and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you think that the benefits of this outweigh the problem?
These days, the number of students going abroad for further education has been increasing at an astounding rate, which ignites a source of controversy whether it is a sharp decision or not. Although I consider the advantages of oversea studies outweigh the disadvantages, in this essay, I will discuss two sides of the same coin.
On the one hand, the challenges which global education poses are undeniable. It is widespread belief that abroad schooling is associated with substantial funding and expenditure. Nevertheless, in order to make certain that the financial pressure will not interrupt the process of education, it is required a firm economic background. Besides, a common problem which international students meet is cultural shock. Being thrown in an absolutely strange environment with outlandish language and unaccustomed lifestyle, it turns out a struggle for some people to integrate. As a consequence, students are under the risk of depression and isolation.
However, on the other hand, I highly appreciate the outstanding benefits of oversea education. Firstly, students are provided a life-time opportunity of accessing to definitely professional academic background, which is hardly found in native country. Secondly, the international diplomas are regarded as the reliable foundation paving the ways to achieve a superior job in years to come. Finally, students have chances to experience and emerge in different original cultures and connect with citizens all over globe, which help them gain knowledge and broaden their horizon.
To summarize, there are significant benefits and drawbacks of international education which are worthy the consideration. Notwithstanding, it is my firm conviction that despite of some inevitable difficulties, it is deserved for us to invest for a brighter future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for us to invest for a brighter future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27069431808 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643636363636 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5659963482 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.785714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118361357487 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356629452697 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262836234754 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690122413193 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0092375346206 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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