More and more tasks at home and at work are being done by robots. Do you think this is a postitve or negative development? Discuss both and give your own opinion. Use explainations and examples from your own experiences.
Robot security guards can now be seen working in banks and parking lots. Nowadays, more and more machines can be observed taking over tasks both at home and in the workplace, and this is changing societies around the world. Robots free time and energy for humans that allow people to spend that energy and time in either positive or negative ways. Overall, I do believe that machine assistance is a beneficial progress both at work and in the home.
There are certainly some deficits for people when robots take over their responsibilities at the office or at home, namely, the loss of income and effort. Millions of cashiers have lost their jobs to automated tellers and this has led to unemployment in this service sector. In addition, people have become more sedentary and obese as they use the extra time created by robot cacuum cleaners and washing machines to watch TV shows, eat chips, and drink beer. I have a few friends that definitely seem to do this too often. Nevertheless, the overall impact of robot assistance has a positive impact on the development of humanity.
Robots at home and in the workplace have freed up millions of hours of time and kilojoules of energy that people can now invest into other fruitful efforts to advance humanity. Shoppers around the world are no longer standing in 20-minute cues to go home with groceries thanks to robot checkouts; once home, they do not need to spend an hour washing clothes by hand, so they can take this extra 90 minutes in the day learning a new skill like cooking delicious food or just spending the time playing with their children. I can attest this has been true in my life and I feel much more satisfied as a result.
In conclusion, robots are becoming prevalent in the workforce and in the home, and their impacts can be viewed as both positive and negative. I definitely believe that the world is a better place with the assistance of machines. Ultimately, it is up to humans to use the extra time and energy provided by machines to make good decisions and use these wisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nevertheless, so, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70637119114 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51538799005 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4856727333 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.266666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230853640806 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828608277245 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589197898014 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151726490253 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671247084314 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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