More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and many are endangered. What are the causes of it and what measures can be taken to solve it?
It is undoubtedly the case that many wild animals are at the edge of elimination and various are endangered. Which is also affecting the ecosystem adversely. In this eassy, i will examine the possible reasons for solutions that authorities could implement to curb the problem.
The first step is to understand why forests animals are eliminated rapidly. There are three mai reasons for this. The first and foremost ia that the individuals are becoming materialistic, they are clearing the forests day by day for constructing buildings, factories and so on. Due to which many animals are killed by them. Apart from that people kill animals for their commercial purposes, also, hunting is becoming a profession for them. Last but not the least pollution is also a big concern for the animals which are living in the polluted areas, they cannot take fresh breathe so, due to which they fall ill and finally die.
There is almost certainly no one solution of this problem given the complexity of its causes. However, one option has to make general public awarevif that the animals are also living beings and they also have same freedom to live on earth as we have. It would also be possible to make some laws against hunters because this problem can be solved by punishing them. A best epitome of this is Salman Khan, a famous bollywood actor, who killed a black deer in year 2005 and recently Indian government took strict action against him and fined him.
In conclusion, there are variety of different factors that have led to animal's killing. While it may not be possible to find complete solution of this, this could be probably be solved if government keep wild animals at safe areas such as at well constructed parks or zoos.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, apart from, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8322147651 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52444470015 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.542529429 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128693083135 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464665055295 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540858973776 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087247573354 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302837498284 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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