More and more work is being carried out by machines in all areas of our lives. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
I’m going to write about whether machines be the responsible of almost everything around us a good or bad thing.
First of all, I suppose is a great thing because of the plenty of risky jobs around. In one hand, instead of putting a human being in a deadly work, we can put a machine, in the other hand machines have the ability to work quickly and perfectly for such a long time without no breaks. However, we won’t despite the fact that machines have helped us with our life for instance cars, planes and ships you can’t let a person carries stuff to transfer it while he/ she is swimming this why we have ships the same with aircrafts these machines take us from one destination to another faster than anything.
Secondly, I personally believe that there are pros and cons and the one con is more machines that’s more lazy people, as an example we can see that elderly people are healthier than most of the adults this due to the movement of in the past of the elderly folks, this what I meant by laziness. Therefore, in the future we will struggle with a lot of body issues this because of the lack of movement in our in our childhood.
In conclusion, machines are amazing tools to prove what the human’s brain can do. Moreover, there are a great deal of jobs machines won’t ever be able to work in like being a surgeon or being fiction writer, but people think that devises are going to take over they aren’t here to take over they are here to assistance us with our life basis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, i mean, i suppose, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51624548736 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43992582255 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574007220217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.8245609845 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.375 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.625 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.875 7.06120827912 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227734110001 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917136516878 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369715711653 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128438122562 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455017073882 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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