More people are able to travel for work and tourism than in the past. Some people think this has had a positive impact. Others worry about the negative effects this is having on the environment and the harm this will cause individual cultures.
In today's modern society, the tourist industry has developed gradually over several years, which causes a conflict between two ideas. it is believed that tourism yields fruitful outcomes; however, some people suppose that this results in certain unfavourite affects societies and individual cultures. Personally, I do think both views are reasonable as each has its own merit.
In terms of the economic aspect, the travel industry has accounted essentially for the national budget. In fact, some countries own a series of scenic spots or attractive destinations which appeal a huge of visitors to travel to these nations, resulting in not only the government but also some private companies are able to earn a large profit via fee tickets, journey taxes as well as travel insurance. Therefore, this leads to the progress in the standard of living of residence. Besides, the public in different countries travels to each other, which could cause a bond in the relationship between other countries.
Nevertheless, a coin always has a two side, there are some negative outcomes which result from overcrowded tourist places. It is clear that regarding environment-related issues, some visitors throw away their nylon bags or plastic bottles on the road after using them. DaLat city in Vietnam takes for example, after winter occasions, DaLat flower city has turned into a “rubbish ocean” with plastic bags that were thrown away by some unawareness people. Not to mention that visitors also have to confront certain risk circumstances, such as pickpocketing, shoplifting, or kidnapping.
To recapitulate, with the aforementioned explanation and example I believe that in addition to the travel industry has made up a massive income for the country, there are also some unfavorable impacts on the environment and society. However, I suppose that these problems are going to be tackle radically in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, i suppose, in addition, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36544850498 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97056043755 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8181145777 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.230769231 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0769230769 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207638006275 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616389545421 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048873285458 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11133706974 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385542385423 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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