More people than ever before travel to other countries than ever before. Why this has happened? Is this a positive development or negative?
It is irrefutable that there has been a significant increase in the number of people go abroad over the past few years. From my perspective, this advance has both negative and positive effects.
There are two main reasons that could be seen in most countries today. Firstly, people tend to going holidays in foreign countries. By virtue of the rapid development of airplane, people can now easily access to any countries in the world with the cheapest cost ever. These days, holiday destinations have many advertisements and promotions to attract global tourists; thus, the number of people choosing foreign destinations increase significantly instead of local ones. Secondly, nowadays not only students prefer to study overseas but also worker want to work overseas. Thanks to the global process, many barriers such as language and culture are narrowed; hence, it is easier for people, especially young students to go to foreign places for broadening their horizons as well as experiencing a new culture.
In my view, the reasons described above should be seen as a process with both advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, it is true that tourism industry develop dramatically, which creating a significant revenue for many countries. Furthermore, it also increase exchange and competition in educations, jobs and culture, which raises the development of many social aspects. On the other hand, as a result of globalisation, many experts from developing countries choose to settle down in developed countries, which expands the already wide development gap between countries. Additionally, it weakens small cultures and rare languages since many people tend to adapt more popular things.
In conclusion, I am strongly the opinion that travel abroad is a necessary trend, which can cause positive and negative effects for the aforementioned reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...or many countries. Furthermore, it also increase exchange and competition in educations,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my view, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41580756014 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99264379967 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621993127148 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8060035823 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166005951086 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530982651658 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509038443337 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968251413557 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186584065421 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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