More people live in cities nowadays than in the past. As a result, more children grow up in urban areas. Some people believe that raising a child in a city is mostly beneficial. Meanwhile, other people claim that it has too many drawbacks. Discuss both views and provide your opinion.
It is inevitable that these days more people tend to move to urban areas thanks to enormous benefits, especially for their children’s future. Nevertheless, some people believe that the way city dwellers bring up a baby has a negative impact on him. Personally, I agree with the statement that living in big cities is advantageous to a child’s background.
On the one hand, it is clear that children can derive numerous benefits from growing up in downtown districts. Indeed, they receive a better education than others in the countryside do. Thanks to up-to-date equipment, students gain unlimited access to useful information such as the politics or new discoveries in science. Also, they can absorb the knowledge regardless of where and when so long as the phones are connected to the Internet. Meanwhile, teachers there are more well-trained than those in villages, hence they can provide the pupils with more effective learning methods and lessons, not only theories in books but practical knowledge as well.
On the other hand, teenagers spending the childhood in the inner-city areas also suffer from some drawbacks. In terms of safety, living in rural areas is obviously preferable because of a much lower rate of transgressions than that in developed towns. Due to the high living expenses and the lack of job vacancies, some people having a shortage of money resort to crimes, stealing money or robbing banks, for example. Furthermore, the density of traffic makes parents fear for the safety of their children. As a result, they prevent the teenagers from going out and outdoor activities, which leads to the sedentary lifestyle and addiction to technology.
To conclude, raising children in city centres has both advantages and disadvantages. My view is that it would be more beneficial for the teenagers to grow up there than in the countryside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, so, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20132013201 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9515949545 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617161716172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8801121303 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314444034389 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873165456698 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595595531584 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183958407085 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661264626284 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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