The rise of the Internet has triggered a series of innovations that have made it in the daily life: what once seemed impossible, like speaking to people on the other side of the ocean or exploring the world thanks to satellite orbiting thousands miles over the atmosphere, has now become reality. Leaving by side the technological breakthroughs and focusing on a more practical aspect, what we are witnessing today is that the Internet has turned out to be an irreplaceable tool int the routine. With a steadily growing number of users accessing the Internet, it is no wonder that concerns about safety and privacy has been risen as well. This essay will analyze the benefits and the potential dangers hidden behind this trend.
Probably regarded as one of the most decisive innovation of the last century, the Internet is an immense source of information: students, doctors, scientist can rely on it when it comes to publishing the results of a research or when they are seeking for solutions. The Internet helps common people as well by supporting them in the everyday life. Shopping online or checking the bank account has become commonplace these days and a very thin minority seems to stick to old traditions. Put it simple, the Internet has made life easier and more comfortable than it used to be.
These apparently bright aspects should however not make us blind of the dangers looming in the dark bends of the cyberspace. Although the Internet grants the opportunity to order items from all over the world and to share our photos with our friends, users should also be aware of the digital footprints they leave every time they access the Web. Social media and shopping sites rely on personal data to offer items to buy or to suggest friends. It is nothing but advertising. Furthermore, users buying goods by using credit cards should also be aware of the potential risks connected with this procedure. Invisible to their eyes and often impossible to snare, cyber criminals try to get their hand on sensitive data to dry out bank accounts. Taking some simple steps, like updating the operating system and running an antivirus program can avert such crimes.
In conclusion, I would urgently recommend users to take actions to preserve their savings, especially when we consider that downloading and installing an antivirus is as simple as quick. Nevertheless, even with such precautions, sharing personal information like telephone number should also be avoided because one can never know who is hiding behind the screen. Too often children as well as adults reveal delicate private information that can fuel the criminal instinct of stalkers, pedophiles or maniacs.
- The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects to everyone Do you agree or disagree 56
- With the advent of the internet increasing number of people are shopping online what issues arise from this and how can they be tackled 89
- Nowadays most developing countries receive financial aid from international organizations However many people believe that help in a form of advice and skill is more important and useful than money Discuss both the views and give your own opinion 89
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 78
- More people put their personal information online e q address telephone number for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes is this positive or negative development 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[2]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...onsider that downloading and installing an antivirus is as simple as quick. Nevertheless, ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2240.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 444.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04504504505 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69962286983 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596846846847 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9360559168 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.444444444 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147038048913 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402629858346 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328568862574 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805258089005 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158277910009 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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