It goes without saying that handicapped and disabled people in the society have been treated like second-class citizens, so most of the policies and rules enacted by the government cannot address their needs. Therefore they are deprived of their basic rights. In this regard, there are some practical and feasible attempts can be made to meet demands of people with specific needs.
To begin with, the government has the major and forefront responsibility to ensure that all the people in the society have the same basic rights without any discrimination. In spite of existing voluntary organizations and programs for assisting the disabled people, the government must implement architectural regulations and standards for designing buildings and public shopping centers for their comfort and convenience. Also, the sidewalks and bus stations should be taken into account. One of the pivotal measures should be taken into account is to eliminate sidewalk barriers or obstacles along with installing platforms specifically designed in bus stops for handicapped people.
Moreover, the government or authorities should establish organizations which can gather the disabled people and identify their talents to give them opportunities to prospect their abilities. Take this as an example, a disabled person who is very talented in painting can join this organization and have the chance to hold an exhibition of his or her art works. It can help these people integrate more to the society and have more chances to flourish.
In essence, there is an urgent need for fundamental changes to infrastructures in transportation system and constructions in addition to social and cultural activities to improve living standards of disabled people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... government cannot address their needs. Therefore they are deprived of their basic rights...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, in addition, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0632396725 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4532883293 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179822670801 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621318475466 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481482353558 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963591287391 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044560976413 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.