Nowadays, economic development is one of the most important factors that every country should focus on. However, some people believe that it is the main reason for the lost social values. Although there exist some drawbacks, I still believe that its advantages do outweigh the disadvantages.
On the one hand, boosting the nation’s economic helps enhance citizen’s life in different aspects such as living standard, medical healthcare and education. The wealthier the country is the more jobs it creates and thus the unemployment rate also witness a significant decline. In addition, people also have access to the innovation medical health care which makes them happier and feels relief thus increase the working productivity. Another benefit of the economic development is for the investment in the education sector which enhance the qualification of teachers, subjects as well as the facilities at schools. As a result, a child will receive more quality education programs which then play an important role in their career in the future.
On the other hand, one of the major drawbacks of economic development is the losing social values it caused. While nuclear families become popular, and due to economic expansion, both parents have to spend most of their time at the office, leaving their kids at home alone. As a result, a child may not be well educated and thus lose some social valuable lessons. For example, children now do not show respect to elderly people, and some with lack of basic communication skills become socially alienated. Moreover, it even worse while being unsupervised, these kids may easily engage in antisocial activities and commit crimes.
In conclusion, I personally believe that the benefits which are brought by the economic advancement of a country do outweigh its disadvantages. Most of the negative effects are due to the lack of consideration from parents and families to children, thus by raising the awareness of them may help solve the problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.290625 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88766064218 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56875 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0463345888 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.866666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236069880218 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781967988283 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656714532343 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14676305919 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427289488614 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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