The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to encourage people from suburbs or the countryside to live in the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that in recent years, many cities apply the policy so as to stop suburban and rural people from moving to the cities. In my opinion, I completely support this statement and in the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall put forth an explanation for my point of view.
To begin with, cities are jam-packed and industrialization or urbanization are the key sources of the decision of the government to prevent the high frequency coming to urban. People tend to move to modern cities with a view to grasping better potential opportunities as well as sending money back to families. As a result, it is a big challenge to find a passable way in peak hours in inner-city areas. Moreover, an increase in the number of cars will, in turn, increase the carbon footprint, thereby leading to problems like global warming. Citizens are riskier to inhale harmful air which contains dangerous elements that we can not see.
Due to overcrowding, there may be a sudden increase in the rate of traumatic accidents. As the frequency of vehicles on the roads is always high and continual, children and the elderly may have troubles when passing roads. In addition, too much traffic like trucks or containers can cause limited vision, which is likely to have accidents if drivers cannot see the road clearly and hit someone who suddenly crosses the streets. Nevertheless, rural people do not know the law on traffic. They are indiscreet and have a proclivity to drive in the wrong sections. That phenomenon can result in unexpected controversies and even serious fights.
In conclusion, moving people from the countryside to cities will fuel the already burning traffic problems. So it is absolutely right to discourage them from settling in modern cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ent years, many cities apply the policy so as to stop suburban and rural people from mov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96917808219 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88372229729 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626712328767 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2397757384 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53333333333 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174514236378 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543643262057 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657944455934 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107451392127 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051744427169 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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