For the last decades, there have been gender differences in top posts in the working field. The majority of leading seats are densely occupied by males in spite of the fact that the labor force in numerous advanced nations exceeds greater than 50 percent woman. While i believe that the institutions ought to be needed to concentrate a marked proportion of the highest positions to females, this essay will support my opinion with relevant examples.
On the one hand, critics claim that the work productivity can be reduced highly owing to the natural personality of women. In other words, females ...
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 368 350
No. of Characters: 1993 1500
No. of Different Words: 246 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.38 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.416 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.924 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 150 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 128 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 88 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 58 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.755 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.786 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.302 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.518 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.028 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ds greater than 50 percent woman. While i believe that the institutions ought to ...
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tually form a solid basis for regaining a implicit faith of representatives. Not ...
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Line 5, column 665, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... of policy of first concern to girls in a administrative role, this type of strat...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...interrelations and substantial profits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, in other words, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54619565217 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99365147229 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671195652174 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6467122021 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.785714286 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125319030063 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399577632681 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348832639511 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667742115819 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275086489653 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.06 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 78.4519038076 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.