The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A huge number of research in different subjects has occurred from a long time ago up to now, so according to some, it could be better if scientists mostly effort to enhance the quality of human lives. In my opinion, the most important aim of every field of science is to help lives people get better.
On the one hand, medicine is one field of science in which our lives involve a lot. Over time it advanced and new approaches were presented. This field is very crucial in human lives because can progress the level of quality of people significantly. For example, in the recent global disaster that every government faced with COVID-19 if there were not any vaccine and preventive measures the number of dead increased daily. Although it has not been eliminate yet, no one else gets this virus. When a person gets sick if doesn’t go to the doctor and use the antibiotic she/he is not feeling well. Hence, medical science can help to quality of our lives.
Another point is the growth of technology which has an important role in our lives. Smartphones, the internet, websites, and vehicles have a special place in our lives. In the past, there were no telephones, and people connected by each other either traveled to another city or used a telegraph which took a long time. By presentation of smart phones not only do call to each other but also use the internet and visit different online shops to buy needs that both save money and time. Therefore, technology plays an important role in the progress of our lives.
In conclusion, it might every field of science has a different purpose but the most important aim is improve the quality of people’s lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...urred from a long time ago up to now, so according to some, it could be better if...
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Line 2, column 451, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'eliminated'.
Suggestion: eliminated
...creased daily. Although it has not been eliminate yet, no one else gets this virus. When ...
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Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...t purpose but the most important aim is improve the quality of people’s lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69283276451 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5338808901 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549488054608 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9688778822 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185073372349 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632962377584 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852805293038 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145813273549 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873114965711 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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