Most of the leaders and directors of an organizations are older people. Some people believe that younger ones can do better than older people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement
It is true that most of the imminent personalities in an organization are aged however, some folks claim that younger ones can lead a company more effectively than the older people. Here, I would like to discord with this statement for some reasons.
There are multifarious points to endorse my view. First and foremost, most of the department heads are well experienced and they know how to manage an organization successfully compared to the new comers. To demonstrate, the new leaders may lack confidence and may sometimes found it difficult to run a company because of less experience. Moreover, the leadership qualities get more prominent and useful only by knowing the flaws and ups of a company and therefore, definitely the newly boomed employees lack that knowledge.
Further emphasizing on my point of view, that the grey headed gone through many hardships and travail for years and then only achieved success. To illustrate, it is important to realize the value and power of a position and therefore, it is crucial for the younger ones to know the worth of a job by experiencing the waves. However, in contrary there are many of the opinion that younger ones are more apt for a company.
To commence with, as per them the new generation are well equipped with the proper knowledge of advanced technologies whereas, the older people sometimes struggle to deal with the modern facilities. But, I think there is not much significance in this argument as the directing quality is entirely different from the lore of technologies.
To recapitulate, even though new generation are capable to compete with the world, I believe that the effective leaders can only be more fruitful with experience and thus older people are more apt for the head of a company.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, i think, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00675675676 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87868764992 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7616981591 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246677136273 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079167756826 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875482194503 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142488922803 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109983277054 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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