Most major cities around the world continue to grow at a phenomenal rate due to the massive increase in population. This has led to a general decline in the quality of life in city areas as the environment becomes more crowded and polluted.
Give some reasons why this growth has occurred and suggest some practical solutions to this problem.
Over the past decades, big cities all over the world witnessed a remarkable proliferation in number of population. Unavoidably, this surge triggered a downfall in the central areas' life qualification. This essay will outlines some causes of this issue and suggest ways in which it can be resolved.
The first step is to understand why population has increased significantly in urban cities while the quality of life slumped. To clarify, large proportion of people want to move to big cities believe there is a higher living standard with chances to find lucrative jobs and better education. This migrating trend is one of the principal reason which of serious overpopulation in big cities. Besides, along with the massive amount of workforce gathering, industrial zones also tend to be formed in these places. The manufacturing activities of such industrial zones happen simultaneously over times explained for the growth of pollution in urban areas.
However, practical solutions to diminish these problems can be found. Governments could facilitate for the economic development in rural ares. With a wide range of developing in rural places, including industrial, technology and medical, citizens would find it easier to have a stable life in their own hometown without moving to cities. Many nations have already implemented these types of action and they received positive result with the reduction in migrating tendency and higher rate of jobs in the countrysides.
To conclude, with all the mentioned rationales, it is reasonable for the soar of populations and pollutions in major areas. To reduce damages of this trend, governments should pay more attention to the economic development of rural places.
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- Most major cities around the world continue to grow at a phenomenal rate due to the massive increase in population This has led to a general decline in the quality of life in city areas as the environment becomes more crowded and polluted Give some reason 78
- Most major cities around the world continue to grow at a phenomenal rate due to the massive increase in population This has led to a general decline in the quality of life in city areas as the environment becomes more crowded and polluted Give some reason 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: outline
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38661710037 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01246013184 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60594795539 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7323468638 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175608204539 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558688040408 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478672754883 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104566787102 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484018745012 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.