Internet plays a indispensable role in everyone's life because it provides a lot of information about the study subjects, business and news all over the world etcetra. It is considered by some individuals that the information on the internet is unreliable. I disagree with this notion. In my opinion, internet is widely accepted as a souce of immense of knowledge which makes the people more satisfied.
Internet is preferred by vast majority of individuals because it is the one of the most trustworthy source. To begin with, to avail a easy and reliable information then internet is the best choice instead of other souces. For example, BBC news and the Reader's Digest are popular news and megazines. It contains all precise information which is already proved by scientist and professionals. Moreover, people also aware about the different job vacancies which is issued by renowned companies and get a job opporunity if all requirements are fulfilled. One more thing is that the internet awares the society about different kinds of products as well hot issues all over the global area.
Furthermore, various sites are on the internet which gather a right and beneficial information. For instance, if any individual want to take a information about astranomy then NASA website is useful and ac.uk websites are helpful in the case of getting admission in University in abroad. Last but not least, students do not need to struck on a particular reading materials. They can get a relevant information of particular subject by surfing the web.
On the other hand, there are various types of information available on the internet and the people always confused to select the appropriate site because they are not sure about the data represent by sites. Another point is that some sites include a incorrect information for their personal benefit. Such as, a site which sell goods online to the consumers and one consumer who is interested in a specific product and after paying an amount by credit card, the purchaser not get anything.
To sum up, although internet have some drawbacks but these problems can be solved by individuals to use it wisely and make more comparison with other sites.
- Leaders and directors in organizations are often older people. Some people say that younger people could be leaders. Do you agree or disagree? 70
- some people believe that construction of new public buildings such as museum town hall and sporting facility is more important than renovation of the existing ones, while others disagree. discuss both views. 78
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and less time on outdoor sports Why is it a positive or negative development 86
- Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in group while others believe that it is better for them to study on their own. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organization Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Internet plays a indispensable role in everyones life be...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iduals because it is the one of the most trustworthy source. To begin with, to av...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tworthy source. To begin with, to avail a easy and reliable information then inte...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nstance, if any individual want to take a information about astranomy then NASA w...
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Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nother point is that some sites include a incorrect information for their persona...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06887052342 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84922541007 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553719008264 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6169046856 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.222222222 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221285058232 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071580785979 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529476683315 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120609213284 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382207817525 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.