In these modern days, the internet becomes our basis for almost anything. All sorts of information could be retrieved instantly with a click of a finger. However, many people still in doubt regarding the accuracy of most of the information gathered from the internet. This speculation leads us into this essay to break down some of the arguments and to pick a stand whether I agree or disagree.
The Indonesian government had established a team called Tim Cyber whose designated to become the law enforcement on the internet. They will search and take an action against any cyber crime, not to mention the false information (which normally people called "hoax"), and will give the guilty side a penalty or sanction according to the law. One case happened in March 2020 where the Covid-19 started to spread in Indonesia. One man around 29 years old obliviously makes a statement that the covid was not ever existed. Tim Cyber got this lead and took an action accordingly. This example must be done because the government must ensure the accuracy of the information that the public got from the internet.
However, we must admit that there is still so many people who had not had a clear mind on spreading a piece of valid information. They wanted to be famous and one of the ways for them to become one, they need to spread information as quickly as possible, no matter if it is proven or not. One day in 2015, Tom Hanks was reported passed away at the age of 60. This information was spread so quickly through the internet to all over the world, and it was too late for Tom himself or his family to make a clarification. Therefore, people started to send condolence messages and flowers to Tom's domicile. Later on, obviously, Tom made a statement that he was fine and the news was not true at all. This kind of case gave us a valuable lesson on filtering the information and always be careful on forwarding messages.
The Internet has become our daily tool to catching up with the world on what is happening. Personally, I personally agree that there is still so much fake news surfing on the internet. However, it is our duty to digest properly all information that came to us. We have to have a mature stand of point on seeing or hearing information before we forward it to our relatives.
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- Most of our information comes from the Internet nowadays Some people say that a large part of the information we get is incorrect Do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 325, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... leads us into this essay to break down some of the arguments and to pick a stand whether I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, however, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67076167076 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70299976031 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542997542998 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9392465612 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5238095238 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47619047619 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218026603012 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631736951947 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555935553959 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150377243427 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626106163576 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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