most people accept that we now live in a globalized world, but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. to what extent is global;ization a positive or negative development
The advent of technological advancement bring several fruitful effects on the world. But some people argues that this development is not beneficial . In the following paragraphs, I will explain the advantages and disadvantages of the technological development.
To embark on, there are plenty of reasons that reflect that the globalization has positive impacts on the world. Firstly, it makes the life more comfortable and easy- going. The development of machines, gadgets have many positive effects on relieving the burden and stress of human from household chores. For example- washing machines is a great invention in this modern world, as it automatically clean the clothes without any human effort , consequently helpful in relieving the burden of masses and provides them extra time to enjoy their hobbies. Secondly, globalization brings advancement in medicine and research , it is not only helpful in curing the diseases but also finding new ways to deal the illness. For instance- robotic surgery is one of new inventions which helps the doctor to do surgeries efficiently , even though most of the functions are being done by robotic machines only.
Conversely, some people opine there are certain drawbacks of globalization on human as well as on environment. On the one hand, the electronic gadgets such as computers, cars are responsible for making individual more sedentary. Due to this, folks are not active as they were in past times and surrounding by several health issues, especially obesity. On the other hand, because of industrialization or development of automobiles, the demand for natural resources such as coal, petrol and more land increases which would bring the risk of extinction of fossil fuels and certainly will put the life in danger.
To conclude, globalization has both pros and cons but by adopting good living ways, understanding the ill effect of this development on ecosystem and adopting environment friendly ways are better alternatives to mitigate its negative effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09773388599 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8107853464 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203986218808 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679460039517 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696231799917 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117908171451 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287314216964 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.