most people do not care enough about enviromental issues . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, due to the development of industrialization, our enviroment is affected considerably. The water is polluted, the air is full of fume from vehicle, factories. Luckily, more and more people care about this problem. this essay will outline some activities which prove that people are paying their attention to the natural issues.
Firstly, it is seemingly that people realize the changes in their daily life, such as more and more wildfires encroach on major cities, the extinction of species. Thanks to the mass media, the television news, human can see that the global warming is being severe in the past few decades. Therefore, they change their mind and encourage themselves to so something that can help to save their living place which is threatened.
Evidently, many campaigns have been conducted in order to solve the problems and raised people’s awareness. they explained the definitions of recycling and showed them how to do it rightly. it made a huge affect on the society. Moreover, there are a lot of young people who gather into groups and do things like : clean the streets, bridges or even collect the plastic bottles and plastics bags – which can not decompose in a short time. The enviroment issues is not only resident’s business but also government’s responsibility. Although there is controversy about what they have done for the nature, it is not deniable that the government has promulgated lists of law that prevent bad actions to our natural habitat and punished strictly to the convicts.
In conclusion, the majority of the population are trying to enhance the enviroment. it is surely that they care enough about the issues that may impact on their lives as the most urgent problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19444444444 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90892556084 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631944444444 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1196590898 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184594978593 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490569366592 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577094049201 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883649215591 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710145556046 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.