It is argued that individuals forgotten the meaning behind festivals, such as traditional or religious , However, some think in these days people want to desire to enjoy their own time and occasions. On the contrary I totally disagree with this aforementioned statement.
To commence with, festivals are play significant role in our life.These belongs to our on culture as well as heritage. Since ancient time de celebrated by our acenters. For example, the Christmas festival of UK country where people perform in this carnival. Firstly,this year letter to Jesus birth many alternative celebrated this fete extremely and enjoyed it. The exchanging or receiving gifts on occasions. And seems to be extremely happy during this festival.all family spend their time with their kids as well as the relatives. Due to the fact that, this carnival extremely significant among with performed by our acenters.
On the other hand, it is celebrated by schools, univercities or colleges. Children or youngster prepared for this occasion before one week in UK. Apart from that, family is also enjoyed their time on this movements. Consequently, individuals are not forgetton in their festival or traditions, To epitome,baisakhi is a festival of Punjab which is related to tradition or agriculture. On the contrary, people also aware this carnival as well as their values.
To sum up, I do not believe that alternative is ignored or forgotten the carnival. Although, if we live in contemporary era but still they are known to the moral values of occasions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, well, apart from, for example, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22983870968 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08090505142 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592741935484 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1630705353 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0625 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215939628635 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632786373631 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499759232028 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126689271583 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591839022857 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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