A majority of people, who dedicate most of the adulthood to work, considers job contentment as a pivotal factor of personal wellbeing. There a numerous factors attributable to job satisfaction, but the aspiration is unrealistic for all labourer.
To begin with, job satisfaction is built on several factors. The first and foremost factor is remuneration which helps employees afford their life expense. In most of the case, people would strive for being offered a well paid position. However, there are employees considering passion as priority of their job, in which they could fullfill their dream by utilising their talent for their interests as well as being recognized by others. In addition, compensation also plays a vital role in job satisfaction, which will ensure their reward according to the level of contribution for the company . By that, employees would be motivated and encouraged in working.
On the other hand, employees contentment, however, often fails to materialize when encountering the cruel reality. With the harsh competitiveness and the unstable of the economy, it urges companies to enhance their working quality as well as efficiency in order to survive. Therefore, more and more qualifications of employees is entailed so that they could , to meet the work requirement, as a result, unceasingly learning is a must for those people so as not to be emitted from the labour market. Furthermore, this economic trend also create a unbearable work burden for the workers, and overtime working is a essential requirement of the job. this lead an increase in the number of ailments including mental health ( stress, depression) and physical health ( heart disease).
In brief, there are a great number of elements leading to job satisfaction, nevertheless, when it come to reality, the expectancy is often impractical.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, in addition, in brief, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31615120275 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11843061311 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0170775753 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3571428571 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312864895056 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990229620867 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070088543857 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181759545327 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707479985153 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.