One of the most conspicious trend in the 21st century is the difficulty of keeping a life-lworkbalance which is also affecting the society adversely . In this essay ,I am going to examie the possible reasons for this trend and suggest some of the proactive measures that parents could implement to reduce this problem .
The first step is to understand why parents want to achieve balance between family and caarrer but only a few manage to achieve it . Broadly speaking, there are two main reasons for this. The first and foremost reason is that in this modern era, there have a cut through the competition as everybody is running behind the money ruthlessly. Moreover, every parents survive in there dailylife as well as face lot of difficulities for earn the huge amount of money for fullfill every need their children even achieve the success in their life. So that is why, parents have lot of burden related their household ,business work and they donot spend quality time with their family member. The best epitome of this is that doctor working 24 hours in the hospital as they donot spend time with family because that job is very strictest.
There is almost certainly no are solution to this problem give the complexity of its causes However, one option has to be to improve of parents should do working from home as they spend time with family as well as parents try to keep set of workhours . Inaddition to this, they would be prevent there self household task as they can save some time and that time they would be balancing child care with work. At last but not least, parents should be consider keep a flexible schedule and that schedule follow by parents as they can spend there important time with family.
In conclusion, there are variety of different factors that there have led to make this problem worse. While, it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this. I personally believe that parents set a limit there responsibilities as well as plane a schedule of time spended work or at home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, as to, broadly speaking, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72521246459 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51640101854 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521246458924 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.0722776406 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122595872404 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488406402671 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284971799595 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777667405462 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183056670573 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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