In most successful companies, some people think that communication between employers and workers is the most important factor, while other people say that other factors are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is sometimes argued that how employers and workers communicate with others is the most important thing in the majority of successful companies. However, many others believe that there are many other factors more important than communication. This is indeed a strong case to be made for both sides of the debate, which will be discussed now.
Regarding the first opinion, it cannot be denied that the interaction between supervisors and workers plays an important role in making a company successful. It can be imagined that a company is a machine in which the members are the components. The machine cannot run effectively without the smooth coordination of different constituents, even the smallest one. It can be easy to comprehend any task when an open discussion between the executives and the operatives occurs. The task performance can be improved as a result. Moreover, a good relationship between employers and their employees can make the working environment more relaxing and enjoyable.
On the other hand, there are many more elements to make a company successful. Firstly, the master plan is a crucial factor that can determine the success of a company. The executives should have a detailed plan for the corporation to follow. Any mistake in how the company operates can affect the goal badly. Secondly, the quality of the leaders and the members also play a significant role in the operation of any organization. This is one of the main factors to ensure each part of the company is running effectively. Well-qualified members can know what they have to do to optimize the efficiency of the tasks.
To sum up, communication between the supervisors and the workers plays an important role in making the company successful. However, there are also many other factors to developing a company.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, in fact, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12794612795 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9895273831 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498316498316 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8618727048 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.6111111111 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271839649181 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826343352442 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826855144828 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189898609541 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904577100737 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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