Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there?
In recent decades, the advantages of highways have been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although this trend appears some problems, there are some feasible solutions to address.
There are many problems that can be caused by motorways. First, since drivers have rights to ride at the high speed, it has been attributed to the highly increasing accidents recently. In fact, there have been more accidents recorded on highways due to the high speed, they find it hard to control their driving in the emergency, such as on rainy days, which leads to implicit threatens when driving on those streets. Second, although it has some benefits for commuters, it has some negative impacts to the environment. It means demolishing the current buildings and residential areas to make way for highways is the main culprit to serious pollutions, along with heavy traffic congestion on motorways, emitting miasmas and smug, which is detrimental to our environment.
On the other hand, we also have some practical resolutions to alleviate these troubles. First, by controlling the speed of driving, it is possible to reduce the number of crashes on highways. For example, governments can enact some strict laws that limit the driving speed, apply many heavy punishments and fines if some people who break law, which contribute to diminish the amount of highway accidents. Second, we should encourage to use vehicle alternative to reduce the level of air pollution. It means authorities should have long-term strategies to facilitate usage of eco-friendly cars and private motorbikes that consume electricity instead of petroleum, partly solving the burden of air contamination in recent years.
In conclusion, there are some problems and solutions related to motorways that should be taken into consideration. By applying some effective methods, we can make the situation better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41554054054 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86808207932 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4087711101 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0777864505826 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301234007632 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451842358565 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0550058347741 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029656797741 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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