In the last few decades, an increasing number of highways have been developed in several countries. It is widely observed that despite the fact that they can be used for covering long distances quickly, there could be numerous drawbacks involved. In this essay, some issues and measures for highways will be discussed at length.
Among the most prominent problems of travelling on motorways is that it could be considered hazardous, especially during bad weather. This is because the speed of all vehicles running on highways is always high, thus more likely to cause fatal accidents than on normal roads. More dangerously, whenever it is foggy, windy, rainy or stormy, driving at such speed may lead to severe risks even to the most skilful drivers. To tackle this, the government should regulate a lower maximum speed for transport when travelling on motorways, as well as develop several instructions to warn people of the weather or sections requiring drivers to slow down.
Another foreseeable drawback of highways is that constructing them may negatively affect the environment. Indeed, as motorways usually account for large areas, many trees are cut down to give room for them. This may result in numerous environmental problems including animal losing their habitats and deforestation occurring more frequently, which may, in turn, reduce the air quality. As a result, it is suggested that the authorities should only build this type of road in areas with less forest area, by that minimising the impact on the ecology system.
To summarise, although it is no doubt that highways are relatively useful, they might also exert detrimental effects on both people and the environment. As a result, local government should have the appropriate methods to address the issues of motorways to ensure that these roads are used effectively and efficiently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, thus, well, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24496644295 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7918999254 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637583892617 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.79217539 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.230769231 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143164133015 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448100218993 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484650719414 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792459833025 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225851308139 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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