It is generally considered that numerous individuals move to the urban areas from the rural areas for doing works and with this situation many hurdles faced in both places. This essay will explicate some problems along with practical solution to mitigate with it in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, movement of society in big cities many trouble faced by the other multitude. First and foremost, pollution grow in the cities. To elaborate it, when the population increased then automatically number of vehicles increased and create the noise and air pollution in large number of quantity. Public can get face the many health problems. For instance, a survey was conducted by the WHO (WORLD HEALTH ORGANIZATION) in 2016 found that mostly in the big cities masses were died for the air pollution because they were can not breathe properly. To mitigate it, regime should that they banned the companies who making the smoking vehicles.
Furthermore, another problem in the rural areas the economy level will decreased. To explain it, many humanity go to the urban cities for the money. In villages many population will decreased and no one any thing will safe which produce the money.Individuals will become very poor. To epitome, a headline was published in "THE MOSCOW TIMES " newspaper revealed that in 2011 many rural areas empty the all people had to go to work in cities and many people had become beggarly. To solve it, government should that many factories will created in the rural areas for society occupation.
To conclusion, although pollution and financial obstacles humans face, yet these problems can be tackled with the help of authority.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, so, then, as for, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15808823529 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66062445109 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0040814661 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.214285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171038684303 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583357079526 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486225044949 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113471110764 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377897244753 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.