Music has always been and continues to be the universal language of mankind. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Hitherto, globalization has led to the interference of music all over the world, and the question of whether this spreading brings people benefits or not has been appealing to public concentration. While some residents lament that music can be a disadvantage to them, I totally lean forward to the opposite by giving some rational evidence.
It is conspicuous that music can bring a variety of messages to music listeners. Each composed songs have their own meaning, whereby, people can simultaneously steep in the music world and finding the meaning of the song. Further and more important, though, a minority of citizens will agree that there are so many language barriers on social media, especially in the Music industry, however, the internet in this day and age allows us to be able to translate any things that we need, so it is capable for music to globalize as a language. An exemplify is music videos on Youtube, many songs were covered by lots of singers in separated parts of the world, their local listeners can understand the lyrics of that song.
Conversely, music is also one way to show personal opinion toward some social issues. One of the most well-known types of music is Rap, which was initially started from colored people. Instead of using weapons, they can use this type of music to blame each other, so their society witnessed a significant drop in dead’s rate. Moreover, music was not only acted as the soul medicine used in the war period in order to motivate soldiers’ spirit, but it also can show up the ethos of each country so that people from wast of life can easily understand and learn by heart their national anthem. Although some residents argue that some songs can possess a bad meaning and it is inappropriate in these modern days, I strongly believe that they still can contribute to the history of music, furthermore, the universal intelligence is now increasing, so seldom do people appealed by these songs.
By way of conclusion, with the high developing speed of art, music obviously can be a human beings’ language.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...erence of music all over the world, and the question of whether this spreading brings people benefits o...
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Line 2, column 540, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e for music to globalize as a language. An exemplify is music videos on Youtube, many songs ...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...nversely, music is also one way to show personal opinion toward some social issues. One of the m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88636363636 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72689391309 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585227272727 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.4962844131 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.333333333 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150477758704 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603529332685 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327996768126 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10076986759 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179889890986 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.