As most countries are trying to improve their economic conditions through industrialisation, we impose an unbearable burden on the ecosystem by consuming a remarkable amount of natural resources. There are several consequences of this phenomenon, but a number of viable measures are taken to tackle these significant environmental issues.
To begin with, the reservation of petroleum, woodland and water is not limitless, and overconsumption of these resources will cause scarcity over the world. When that scenario happens, nations will fight over it, while cars, machines and industries will be useless without oil. Furthermore, deforestation is disrupting our ecosystem by causing the extinction of various species as well as being responsible for the emission of greenhouse gases. Lastly, freshwater, which holds accountable for the lives of the living organism, is another big area of concern since it only occupies a negligible percentage at 3% of water reservation. Therefore, the deterioration of it will make our living on the earth impossible.
Due to the fact that this is a global issue, every authority and individual should make their best attempt to prevent such a bleak future. By increasing the price and publishing strict laws related to oil usage, governments can control the maintaining amount of it. Besides, factories and operations must be prohibited from contaminating the water, while inhabitants should be encouraged to use limited litres of water per day. Finally, house owners should consider gardening and plantation as a compulsory part of their buildings.
In conclusion, since natural resources directly affect our lives and the existence of other species, humankind should protect them by decreasing our usage and enhancing the environment’s condition.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, furthermore, if, lastly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63837638376 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23136849508 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671586715867 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2848527464 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17142004782 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508394660864 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352346137156 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085066958584 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246990283072 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.