Neighbors are not close to each other these days as they use to be in the past. What do you think are the problems behind this and what are the possible solutions to them?
Neighbors are the important part in everyone's life because neighbors can share their problems with each other.As per the stated notion,it has seen the relationship between the neighbors is not good as in the past times.There are so many reasons of this problem which we discuss below.
To begin with this,one of the problem is safety issue; people do not believe anyone easily.People do not trust each other because the crime rate has increased from the past few decades.For this problem, society can arrange a compulsory get together meetings, where they can share their thoughts with each other and people can easily distinguish between trustful and non trustful person.
Moreover, the second problem related to this is cultural diversity. In the past, colonies were divided by religions or by cultures. But in the modern era,people migrate around the globe for their jobs and it has observed that people with different cultures believe do not trust each other easily. For this problem, people can exchange gifts or sweets on the particular festivals. For example,in a country like India; people with different religional believes live with each other and they can share sweets on their festivals like Muslims and Hindus can share on diwali and eid .
In addition, people these days are more busy in their schedule as compared to the past times. It is also observed that people are less social these days and when they get leisure time, they prefer to spend their time in themselves and they do not interact with their neighbors. For this problem, government can organize free social clubs ; where they can learn many sports and other activities like cooking. It can also help them to be more social and they can also spend more time with their neighbors.
To conclude this, there are so many issues, why people do not have good relations with their neighbors because of safety issues, cultural diversity and because of busy schedule. For this problem, society can arrange a get together, people can exchange gifts and foods with each other. Moreover, government can organize free social clubs, where people can interact with each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, for example, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07344632768 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41832888722 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466101694915 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.0758022318 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.285714286 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209721309319 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093213131365 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376000989857 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14675406528 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253878491075 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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