New technologies provided machines which replaced workers to do certain physical jobs and tasks.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In the 21 century, advancement in the technology has been changed our life that we used to live. machines are become integrated part of our life that no one can resist themselves from being using it. however, there are various advantages and disadvantages associated with use of machines.
Let me start by considering the fact that machines make our life easier and covenant. Firstly, one of the pertaining fact is that robots can do limitless without taking rest. Secondly, heavy work such as constructing buildings and bridges need precise efforts and time. this will be done with the help of machines. Thirdly, machines can perform without making mistakes unlike human do. Furthermore, the rapid pace in the production line with the use of machines increase the productivity.
However, there are numerous drawback also come along with the invention of the machines and robots. firstly, it is continuously replacing human job. Big companies and factories are giving importance to machines rather than humans. Thus, it will increase the unemployment rate around the world. In addition to this, one of the main drawback is that job opportunities for the people will also reduce. Moreover, machines make the employees lazy which eventually reduces human skills and talent. Overall, we cannot deny the benefits of the robots in our day-to-day life. But, the accessive use of machines will definitely entangled our life with machines.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Machines
... changed our life that we used to live. machines are become integrated part of our life ...
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... bridges need precise efforts and time. this will be done with the help of machines....
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Suggestion: Firstly
...e invention of the machines and robots. firstly, it is continuously replacing human job...
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...o this, one of the main drawback is that job opportunities for the people will al...
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Suggestion: entangle
...cessive use of machines will definitely entangled our life with machines.
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Suggestion:
...itely entangled our life with machines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26086956522 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77028521117 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.7042211454 49.4020404114 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.1764705882 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5294117647 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147797128707 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469772472969 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390639618005 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954791701195 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124537810863 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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