News media is importand in our society. Why is it so important? Is its influence positive or negative?

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News media is importand in our society. Why is it so important? Is its influence positive or negative?

In this highly competitive era of today, information is an invaluable asset for every individual. The world is changing fast, and new technologies have different new tools for media, which has a developing impordance for the modern society. This essay intends to analyze the causes of such role new media has, which I consider as a largely positive trend.

To begin with, one of the core reasons of technological transformation of media is the consumer’s need for up-to-date information. The search for fastest dissemination of news have caused the creation of news channels and social media tools in the Internet. Taking into consideration that, for instance, Facebook live broadcasts inform people much faster about everyday cultural or social life than such traditional methods as the television or printed newspapers are, the role of electronic means of media is increasing dramatically.

Secondly, people tend to prefer more innovatve solutions of media due to their multifunctionality. Such means of media, as the Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, Youtobe, are able to combine various technologies of information dissemination, such as visual (video), sound (audio) and textual (typed texts) contents. Consequently, they become more attractive and functional in comparison with their alternatives, namely with conventional newspapers, television or magazines, because the latters more often than not, contain merely one or two of the above mentioned types of contnents.

To sum up, it can be reiterated that the irreplaceble role of innovative media is based on their abilities of spreading fresh information, as well as their functionality in terms of using multiple types of materials. In my opinion, these developments are definately positive.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61278195489 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32428837655 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646616541353 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0471153071 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.727272727 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1818181818 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102786779658 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406244489063 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367283033959 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582703489881 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028067723923 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.82 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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