No one can deny the power of media in the present world. It holds a notorious image too with its attempts to intrude in the private lives of celebrities. Why do they need to do so, and is it fair on their part ?
It is undeniably fact that media has been governing over famous people despite being defamed for abruptly penetrating in their lives. Though, media and celebrities have been connected with each other, in my opinion media should not unadequately interfering their lives.
To commence, there are considerable factors why media needs to intrupt or cover personal lives of famous people. Firstly, well-known people have always been a center for all news channel as they are more bounded with the news which can provide content for their news channel such as their daily activities and social gatherings , conforntation on social platform , their relationships and to name a few which can give fame to that channel. Secondly, to explode factual news which is necessary to know being a citizens such as Juhi chawla has raise their voice to cut down 5G internet as it is affecting flora and fauna along with humans by its radiations.
However, it is inappropriate to get in people’s lives without their permission and to spread rumours about them. However, a journalist should cover positive news which can inspire youth and drive them in the correct direction. Despite the fact that, there life is mess of various activites, one should not underestimate their struggles which should broadcast and interview related to their lives and hardships they had to achieve popularity at such a top level.
In conclusion, aforementioned discussion propound the view that although media has right to capture and smoothly broadcast that news, someone’s life should not be stuck in danger due to such activity of gaining more popularity. People always support moral values such as humanity.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir lives. Though, media and celebrities have been connected with each other, in ...
^^
Line 2, column 328, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r daily activities and social gatherings , conforntation on social platform , thei...
^^
Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rings , conforntation on social platform , their relationships and to name a few w...
^^
Line 2, column 508, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a citizen' or simply 'citizens'?
Suggestion: a citizen; citizens
...l news which is necessary to know being a citizens such as Juhi chawla has raise their voi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 543, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'raised'.
Suggestion: raised
...eing a citizens such as Juhi chawla has raise their voice to cut down 5G internet as ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25650557621 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76699625894 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.4637979962 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.4 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153994336422 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622915059551 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394078711283 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880592895915 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434374712894 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir lives. Though, media and celebrities have been connected with each other, in ...
^^
Line 2, column 328, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r daily activities and social gatherings , conforntation on social platform , thei...
^^
Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rings , conforntation on social platform , their relationships and to name a few w...
^^
Line 2, column 508, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a citizen' or simply 'citizens'?
Suggestion: a citizen; citizens
...l news which is necessary to know being a citizens such as Juhi chawla has raise their voi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 543, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'raised'.
Suggestion: raised
...eing a citizens such as Juhi chawla has raise their voice to cut down 5G internet as ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25650557621 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76699625894 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.4637979962 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.4 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153994336422 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622915059551 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394078711283 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880592895915 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434374712894 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.