These days, individuals living in huge urban areas and they Facing many problems in daily lives. In my opinion, the migration to small areas is a great solution which government should encourage residents.In this essay, im discuss about people problems in urban areas and why government should encourage people to small town.
Nowadays, people are migrate small cities to urban areas becouse of good facilities. Therefor cities expand in areas and population. People face many problems in daily lives. Large city living cost is much higher than it is in small town. Big cities resident pay higher money on housing, food and transportation. Public face many health related problems in big cities because of environmental pollution. Pollution is a serious problem in big cities. People suffering from health related problems like cancer and heart disease. Big city's people life is shorter compare to the rural areas people. Survey of Indian magazine, criminal rate is higher in huge cities. Nowadays, industrial revolution is increased in city side because of good facilities. Industrial revolution cause more pollution. Furthermore, traffic and dearness is also serious problem in city lives. Therefore, i think that cities people face many serious problems in their daily lives.
However, there are various solutions. Government can change this situation of people in big cities. Government should encourage people to rural area side. This is the best solution of this problems. People attract city side because of good basic facilities therefor firstly, government should work on basic needs and facilities in small town side. Government should more focus on rural infrastructure like schools, hospitals, and transportation. Government should try to give more job opportunities in small town side.
In conclusion, i believe that, in daily lives, people face many problems in big cities. Government should try to give good facilities and opportunities in rural areas side and encourage people to move in small areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43630573248 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75382701485 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445859872611 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8817050789 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.28 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.56 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464647202983 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14552867106 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1310702154 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312693244315 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680708757273 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.38 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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