Nowadays both men and women spend a lot of money on beauty care. This was not so in the past.
What may be the root cause of this behavior? Discuss the reasons and possible results.
The usage of different types of cosmetic products has been increasing rapidly because they are easily accessible. As a consequence, in contemporary time, both men and women overspend their money on such products to enhance their outer appearance. This essay will explore two primary reasons and two possible results of this trend.
To begin with the causes, first and foremost, people have been using different types of social media platforms, such as Instagram, Facebook, Twitter, and many more, that promote different types of products, especially beauty care-related products, for the last half decade. As a result of that, individuals tend to purchase these products regularly, and with time, they get addicted to using them. For instance, the report submitted by Time of India depicts that an Instagram advertisement made by Lakeme, which is the most popular brand for beauty care products in India, contributed around 43.72% of its sales in 2022. The influence of peers is another factor behind the continued use of these products. Human beings generally have at least one role model in their lives, and they want to become like them. In other words, if a celebrity starts to use such products in his daily life, his followers will automatically start to use them.
Moving onto the possible outcomes, firstly, people may suffer from various skin-related diseases. To clarify, chemicals that are used to produce beauty care products have a negative effect on sensitive skin because they damage skin tissues. For example, people are suffering from itching after applying these products. Last but not least, people have been purchasing expensive beauty care products. Hence, they might face difficulty to maintain their monthly budgets.
Overall, it is evident that there are various causes, such as promotion and influence, responsible for compulsive spending on beauty care products, which can lead to serious consequences like skin-related issues and poor management of expenditures. Thus, it is important to control the usage of such products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, thus, at least, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3653250774 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71707062007 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600619195046 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0138873583 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.3125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131988501869 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421103958769 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053155021412 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893645572264 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589948651614 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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