Nowadays buy more and more things things which are unnecessary why it so happening
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a coupe of decades.Presently, the tendency of buying new goods are gaining prevelance .so, people buy things which a are unnecessary. Hence, it supposed to be perilous. Here, i would accounts for this happening and it's merits.
There are manifold causes of happening this.First and foremost, it is the ear of competitiveness. Several companies are competing to each other.so, they are providing concession on consumer goods.people are allure to buy them and buy products which are useless.Taking a real lofe example into consideration, people buy set of soaps even they require not all.Moreover, these days products advertising by film stars or celebrity and packaging of goods are excellent which allure people and compel to buy unnecessary goods.
Next, people buy innovative product for show-off.To justify, living standard of people are uplift .so, folks buy products for elevation their personality in society.Thus, such tendency compel people to buy goods.
This trend is perilous for society. To commence with, the tendency of buying more and more products make people to is spendthrift.Thus,they have to work more than their stipulated hours which can the cause of destructive maladies.Im addition, using the goods in excessive amount can be responsible to the consumerism. To justify, people buy innovative product and through the old ones which can contaminate the environment. Therefore, this trend has too many cons
To concclude, this happening has negative result even we can not be totally eliminated from society, it can be curbed up to some extent if we serious regard this happening.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4280155642 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25296483127 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583657587549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.533186803 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.5 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242120074555 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820169175726 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710477811896 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124359262715 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062294880646 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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