With advancing time the unification of diverse heritages is being observed in many areas around the globe. As seen majority of individuals are deliberately abiding non - native traditional values due to globalization. A number of factors are responsible for the converging cultures and in my notion it is a progressive and optimistic development.
Commencing with the cause of cultural familiarties , one of the reasons is escalating migration of people to foreign countries for the purpose of study, buisness, etcetera. Clearly , the foreign lifestyle becomes infused with the migrants thus cutting barriers of unfairness among them .More over , the growing social media has led the ignorants ti adopt and learn other countries way of dressing ,eating , dancing and other skills. Tourism largely accounts the claim as greater number of tourists are visting the other regions because of convenient air trips. For illustration ,international conference s are organized with the goal in some countries to aware the delegates if the respective customs.
Obviously, such attempts proved successful in drawing the large globe into small communal village . Chiefly, the issue of racism and discrimination has been overcome with mininimzing insecurity while abroad. Furthermore , the mindset of backward tribes and villagers could be widened inspiring them to abandon superstitions and illogical beliefs. Interestingly, the diversified humans developed similar perspectives that enabled a lot of international disputes ton be ameliorated at one place. United nations for example ccupies the major area that recognised and solved worldwide problems.
To encapsulate with ,the increasing overseas settlements and journeys landed the global diverse people to feel togetherness. Besides this, the foreigners feel securily outside home countries and rhe entire world is stepping towards peace and neighbours prosperity.
- The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 78
- Nowadays cultures of different countries are becoming more similar than they used to be.What are the reason? Is it a positive or a negative development? Give your own opinion and examples. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, so, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82437275986 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15569271296 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709677419355 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8643746639 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.071428571 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10199297742 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283270969036 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030793783057 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0507401404106 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243644960122 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.26 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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