Nowadays the differences between countries are becoming less evident because we see the same TV Shows, advertisement, fashion and follow the same brand.
To what extend the advantages of this trend outweighs disadvantages?
style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Helvetica Neue";">In recent yearsstyle="font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; font-family: ".PingFang HK";">, as people in the world share the same entertainments and adapt the similar stylestyle="font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; font-family: ".PingFang HK";">, the cultural differences between nations are narrowing. some of the main changes will be identifiedstyle="font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; font-family: ".PingFang HK";">, before an evaluation on wether this is a positive or negative tendency is made. While this trend is beneficial to some extentstyle="font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; font-family: ".PingFang HK";">, I would argue that its disadvantage are more significant.
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style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Helvetica Neue";">There are serval disadvantages to have an integration of culture. Firstlystyle="font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; font-family: ".PingFang HK";">, the world will become a single village as it has the same features among the different nations which damages the cultural diversity. For examplestyle="font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; font-family: ".PingFang HK";">, if every one in the world eat the same kinds of foodsstyle="font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; font-family: ".PingFang HK";">, the same types of clothesstyle="font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; font-family: ".PingFang HK";">, the society will will become a city without any characteristic. As a resultstyle="font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; font-family: ".PingFang HK";">, people will not appreciate others culture and force the unusual parties to adapt the same style with them. Secondstyle="font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; font-family: ".PingFang HK";">, the particular world resources will suffer a lack and the rest will be disappear. When no one in the society preserve the species and culture that they rarely interested instyle="font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; font-family: ".PingFang HK";">, as people have the same perspectivestyle="font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; font-family: ".PingFang HK";">, these species will become extinctive which deteriorate the biodiversity and thus destroy the balance of the nature. I believe that it is noteworthy for us to keep the various forms of cultural as it is favorable to the future development.
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style="margin-bottom: 0px; font-stretch: normal; font-size: 12px; line-height: normal; font-family: "Helvetica Neue";">The only advantage of this change is it provide a convenient life for people to social with each other. As people in the world under the same interestsstyle="font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; font-family: ".PingFang HK";">, they can blend in with others easily. As a consequencestyle="font-stretch: normal; line-height: normal; font-family: ".PingFang HK";">, it lessen the situation for discriminations to occur and improve the relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, so, thus, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4213.0 1615.20841683 261% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 490.0 315.596192385 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 8.59795918367 5.12529762239 168% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.86911157848 2.80592935109 245% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.375510204082 0.561755894193 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1089.0 506.74238477 215% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.2 1.60771543086 137% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.810328913 49.4020404114 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 280.866666667 106.682146367 263% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.020813542216 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0186238938202 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0179646570024 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0101121111538 0.151304729494 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132106619367 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.4 13.0946893788 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.76 50.2224549098 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.9 11.3001002004 203% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 33.19 12.4159519038 267% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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