In modern era, an increasing trend is visible in the partition of families which not very near when it compares to past days. In this following essay I intent to explore the various aspects of the given issue and pendown my views on them.
As a result of technological improvement, an ample of development are observed in household sector in which highly sophisticated technology gives advances in basic needs. People are separated from each other due to less needs. Moreover, communication gap also increased due to advancement in contemporary concepts. For instance, in ancient days people were using wells together to collect water. But at the present all families are depend on individual wells and water supplies.
Furthermore, lack of closeness may lead to riot among the societies due to loss of moral values. Attitudes and personalities of people are depends on family life. All these factors affect the society finally. Moreover, number of people are reduces for functions and other ceremonies.
To recapitulate, it is clear that family relations are taken away by increased gap between the families. To sustain a society as role model, family should show enough relations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun needs is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...le are separated from each other due to less needs. Moreover, communication gap also...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...er. But at the present all families are depend on individual wells and water supplies....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 191.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24083769634 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91587785851 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680628272251 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.584206974 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143301566698 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453510221057 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323518956432 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773373323211 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243865919526 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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